நனையாத
மழைத்துளி
நனைத்துச் செல்கிறது…
இதில் நனைந்தது யாரோ!
Nanayaatha
Mazhai Thuli
Nanaithuch selkiradhu…
Ithil nanindhadhu yaaro!!!
அவள் நீயா, இல்லை அவன் நானா?
வேறுபாடின்றி அது நாமா???
விழி பெய்யும் துளியும்
மழை வெள்ளம் தானே!
துளி செல்லும் வழியும்
நெடுந்தூரம் தானே!!!
துளி சொல்லா வலியில்
நம் மனம் தூரம் தானே!
Aval neeya, illai avan naana ?
Verupaadinri athu naama ?
Vizhi peyyum mazhayum
Thuli vellam thaanea.,
Thuli sellum vazhiyum,
Nedum thooram thaanea.,
Thuli solla valiyil
Nam Manam thooram thaanea !!!
Nice one Ragu. Wish you could go.on some more with this.kavithai, as it has a scope to development.
If you don’t mind can i try the next para to this poem of urs in tanglish
Aval neeya, illay avan naana,
Mizhigul kul olindhirukkum
Indha eeram koodai oru
Mazhai thuli thane.
Adhil nanayadhavargal dhan yaaru?
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Hello Anamika., Thanks for your excellent response.
Extraordinary lines, I loved the each lines, especially last line 🙂 Like this I’m expecting a more and more Tamil kavithai from you Anamika. You made my morning awesome. Thanks.
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Haha, but as u knw my limitations in tamil is my writing and reading tamil. I think i will co relate with u and write in your blogs comment box. May be u can translate that in tamil and post it in ur blog. I am just joking Ragu. Otherwise I am not that a good writer of Tamil poems, it’s just that I saw ur beautiful lines and the poet in me got carried away. So I ended up scribbling something.😁
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Superb idea Anamika, With your permission i just added your lines in the poem.
I just added few words with your great lines 🙂 pls check it out.
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Oh sure! I am on my way to ur blog.
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Superb Ragu, now this kavithai is really meaningful. You can write longer ones like this, once in a while as the wtiter in you blooms when u are motivated. Thanks for adding the credit too. I am honoured to be a part of ur post and blog. Thanks once again. Have a happy sunday. Enjoy ur day.
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